Rewrite my script please
I need your help.
I have a line in an upcoming musical that I need to change. The line as written is...
"A fine woman is the greatest work of God on Earth. You can talk all you want about Niagara Falls or the Pyramids. They aren't in it at all."
Niagara Falls are a beautiful example of a great work of God. But the Pyramids? Without getting into the semantics of whether or not they were created by God, let's just say I think there are better examples of great works of God besides the Pyramids.
What should I replace 'the Pyramids'? The Northern Lights, Pikes Peak, The Republican Party and low-carb peanut butter are the best I can come up with. Please send me your suggestions.
posted by Dale @ 10:24 AM
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2 Comments:
dude-
you don't want to mess with stewart and herman. what they wrote is gold. you DO not want them showing up opening night if you mess with their work.
just a warning.
Stewart died in 1987...herman is 82 years old...I think I can take him if necessary, but his lawyers would probably get me
20 more days and I'm free!
Just in case you were wondering, it's not very fun rehearsing with a different Barnaby and Mrs. Molloy each rehearsal for an entire week.
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